Never wrote a critique but I want to do so at least once, since I am a Fan of RWBY and cherish the series very much. My thanks you have Monty, may you rest in Peace or party hard in Heaven.
As for the Artwork!
You are undoubtly beautiful and I have yet to find something on your Cosplay that could be made even better. But its very precise in detail. Even the Rapier, wow.
The skirt looks has obviously not as many frills underneath but that gives your Weiss look a more realistic, less animated touch so I am not sure if that can be seen as something distanced from perfection.
Nah I just write all this because of your pretty face.
Where is the bitchyness?
Weiss could gaze at something so concentrated yes bu~t ... this pose is so "nice and powerful". ;D
Weiss's natural cockyness is kinda missing in your gestur.
And yeah your facial expression does not show any underestimation of your target. You look like your guard is up 100%.
Weiss would look a little more haughty and overconfident I had think.